20 August 2010

beaten and left for dead

No coffin for this
love killed by your thoughtlessness;
naked mouldering.

3 comments:

  1. I like the bitter darkness of this haiku - no birds and flowers here...thank you!

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  2. #1 - Like the new layout
    #2 - Excellent little poem, creepy just as its meant to be. Short, yet so very filling.

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  3. Thanks Erin, CJT! Your comments are much appreciated ;)
    I keep finding that the haiku tend to come in batches and end up making a series out of them... I'm not sure whether this distracts from them individually so I like to post them here as individual ones too, to try them out!

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