07 August 2016

erasure experiment 004


I've found a simple way to blot out the unwanted words, but worry that things might end up looking a bit same-y if I use that method all the time, so will definitely keep experimenting with other ideas as they occur to me...


Wide awake
Afternoon disaster,
writing monosyllabic, tapering hands
Stromness afternoon
witty, vivacious, he showed us a Queen of our attention
Enthralled islands, different world unreal in that morning
Sentences that pleased come back,
walk and belong here in Orkney
On Papa Westray
overlooking the sea,
the seventy islanders dance


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