practice makes perfect: haiku n° 4

03 April 2010

haiku n° 4

You pull out of me,
drive from the hotel; litter swirls
windblown vortices.

3 comments:

Anonymous03 April, 2010
Quite amazing to say the least. And sexy.

My v-word is somen. lol.
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Sandra Davies03 April, 2010
Sexy, sad, aching - has me thinking of leaves swirling on concrete for some reason
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practice03 April, 2010
manchester is full of concrete...
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