03 April 2010

haiku n° 4

You pull out of me,
drive from the hotel; litter swirls
windblown vortices.

3 comments:

  1. Quite amazing to say the least. And sexy.

    My v-word is somen. lol.

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  2. Sexy, sad, aching - has me thinking of leaves swirling on concrete for some reason

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  3. manchester is full of concrete...

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